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« Thread Started on Jul 22, 2004, 2:56pm » | |
Popomundo is an online game(A website). And I didn't know where to put this so I put it here.
Anyway, like I said Popomundo is an online game where you join a community of singers'. Yes, EVERYBODY are singers' and you write your own songs. You can live in London, NYC(I think), Stockholm, and somewhere else.
I was hoping to get like some type of feedback on my second song. It's called Labled me Insane.
Something's gonna eat me,
Something's kill me,
Chasin' me down a dark hallway,
Now I'm gettin' scared.
[Chorus]
When you looked at me,
The way I walk,
The way I talk,
Everything about me,
You labled me insane.
I walked down a street,
People stared at me,
Making rude about who I am,
They labled me insane.
[Chorus]x2
My mind is fragile,
My heart is blank,
You looked at me,
The way I am,
And labled me insane.
Oh, oh, you labled me insane....
So, what do you think? I don't really like it, but then again, I don't really like anything I write.
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« Reply #1 on Oct 21, 2004, 5:03pm » | |
Not bad, but I think that it could still use some work.
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